Contest Ratings

23 Originality
The most wonderful thing about this was that it was done in rhyme. The story was very cool too, and it only lost a couple of points because Beavis and Butthead showed up, and I don't much like that. They're dead - let them stay that way.

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20 "Trueness" to the show
Snipe-hunting seems like something that the Lawndalians would be tricked into doing, and this was carried off with the same finesse that an episode of the show would, if it were written in verse.

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10 Fits the title
I think Daria's wonderland would be where she could have anything she wanted happen. And that was done via the bird in the trees.

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14 Spelling, grammer, punctuation
A couple of easily caught misspelled words, but it didn't detract from the story as a whole.

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20 Humour
Very funny. The effect of the rhyming made it all seem so much more like a funny story, as opposed to a script that was trying too hard.

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10 Over-all impression
Original and accurate, and funny too! It was almost like reading a kids' storybook about Daria. I'd like to see more verse from this author.

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97 Total Score


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