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| 15 |
Originality |
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This reminded me a lot of an episode of
the Simpsons where Homer goes through a chili pepper
induced hallucination. Altho I did like the part where
the author places himself (or herself) in the action.
And didn't the show just have an eps where the family
trips out? |
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| 17 |
"Trueness" to the show |
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I would have figured Jake to make this
chili, not Helen. Or Helen cooking much either. But
Daria sounds like Daria, Jane like Jane, Quinn like
Quinn. |
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| 10 |
Fits the title |
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Well, Daria does end up in a Wonderland. |
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| 15 |
Spelling, grammer, punctuation |
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No problem here. |
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| 10 |
Humour |
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Not too funny |
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| 6 |
Over-all impression |
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I just felt this wasn't as good an entry. |
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| 73 |
Total Score |
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