| 15 |
Originality |
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There's a Valentine's Day dance, and Trent
takes Daria. I keep thinking I've seen this plot a dozen
times in a dozen fan-fics. |
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| 17 |
"Trueness" to the show |
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I thought the characters felt like the
characters, but I wish the story had been longer so
we could see them fully developed. |
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| 5 |
Fits the title |
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I think everyone forgot the title was
"Daria in Wonderland." |
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| 15 |
Spelling, grammer, punctuation |
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No problems here. |
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| 10 |
Humour |
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I thought there were a couple possibilties
for really funny situations in this piece; Daria going
to a dance (can she?), Quinn and the Fashion Club and
what to wear; Trent returning to High School (does anyone
remember him), Upchuck at a dance (The guy is funny
on his own), even the idea of canned food donations
for a dance. But they were never developed. |
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| 5 |
Over-all impression |
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This was definately an entry I felt could
have been expanded further. |
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| 67 |
Total Score |