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Originality |
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Please, someone tell me how many times
that this tired old story has been told. It started
in Dated, then Daria and Trent went to a dance together
in Carpe Diem, and the same story has been repeated
over and over and over in at least 10 fics. If anything
inadvertently comes out of the new season, I hope it's
new fanfic plots. It could have made 5 points if Daria
went with ANYONE else except Trent! The one point awarded
is due to the fact that no mention was made of Jane
and Jesse. I guess every cloud does have a smoky grey
lining. |
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| 20 |
"Trueness" to the show |
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The piece, while a repetition of at least
10 other fics, was remarkably true to the show. Lots
of sarcasm. Lines that Daria would actually say. Retardedness
of Quinn and co. Sandi being a bitch. This one was actually
right on. |
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| 0 |
Fits the title |
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They made up their own title. Which defeats
the purpose of writing for the title intended. |
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| 6 |
Spelling, grammer, punctuation |
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Atrocious grammar errors. I absolutely
abhor the "your-you're" swap, and that one was in it
frequently. There were also several errors that could
have been caught running this thing through a spell-checker.
Most people wouldn't have spanked this one as heavily
for grammar, but that's one of my pet peeves. |
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| 5 |
Humour |
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It was VERY, VERY, VERY hard to find humor
in this since I found it hard to become interested in
a story that I've read so many times before. I'm giving
5 points to be merciful, which perhaps I shouldn't be. |
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| 1 |
Over-all impression |
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Unoriginal, gramatically incorrect, unfunny.
There's not much I can say for this story, since I've
already given the authors who originally wrote this
genre my praise. |
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| 33 |
Total Score |